Idk what to say about the first couple honestly, the concept was good but 30 chapters weren't enough, it felt like the author wanted to make the story deep but adding so much smut, ending each chapter abruptly, not describing inner thoughts of both of them as detailed and varied? As in all the bottom kept saying throughout the whole story was that he has nightmares and that he loves hyung like come on give him some more personality, thoughts?! Anything, but no!! He keeps repeating the same shit and it adds nothing to the story. Anyways all of these stuff made the story shallow and confusing. Its like the author wanted us the read between the lines but rather than lines there were just few words thrown together, not sure if it makes sense but yeah. I absolutely enjoyed the second couple's story and it was just perfectly cute over all, 10/10 for them <33 Overall story isn't really worth the read cuz you keep expecting a climax but there really isn't one that's shocking enough considering the heavy plot, its just a reused shock factor and there's nothing new. I will say tho, there was one good connecting the dots moment, which was when at the start of the story we see the top killing a butterfly in his hands and the bottom is disgusted by it but at the end, we see something similar happen (won't spoil it), so that was interesting.
Idk what to say about the first couple honestly, the concept was good but 30 chapters weren't enough, it felt like the author wanted to make the story deep but adding so much smut, ending each chapter abruptly, not describing inner thoughts of both of them as detailed and varied? As in all the bottom kept saying throughout the whole story was that he has nightmares and that he loves hyung like come on give him some more personality, thoughts?! Anything, but no!! He keeps repeating the same shit and it adds nothing to the story. Anyways all of these stuff made the story shallow and confusing. Its like the author wanted us the read between the lines but rather than lines there were just few words thrown together, not sure if it makes sense but yeah.
I absolutely enjoyed the second couple's story and it was just perfectly cute over all, 10/10 for them <33
Overall story isn't really worth the read cuz you keep expecting a climax but there really isn't one that's shocking enough considering the heavy plot, its just a reused shock factor and there's nothing new.
I will say tho, there was one good connecting the dots moment, which was when at the start of the story we see the top killing a butterfly in his hands and the bottom is disgusted by it but at the end, we see something similar happen (won't spoil it), so that was interesting.