Is it crazy that I would've felt this story might have been more interesting if mc returne...

Cheeseycow January 27, 2025 12:06 am

Is it crazy that I would've felt this story might have been more interesting if mc returned only slightly into the past or just didn't die like somehow after ml stabbed him he wasn't totally dead and the story went from there as ml probably would've kept his body

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    Cheeseycow January 27, 2025 12:29 am

    Though this story Is okay it just feels very generic like I've read all these plot points many times and now it's just all on one in this if that makes sense