I’m sorry, but I need to rant about this story, because it’s been so long since I’ve come across a story as shitty and disgustingly toxic as this one. Now, I’m all for reading toxic shit, just take a look at my read list but holy hell this story is just beyond terrible. We start off with uke R-ing the seme while he is in a literal coma (he could have restrained himself). Then later when the seme is well again he just starts to abuse the uke, smacking him, r-ing him, strangling him, and just overall beating him while the body guard just stands there and watches simply because the father said “as long as his womb is okay, you can do what you want”. Not to mention the seme trying to get the uke gangbanged by throwing a party in the house so he could watch him suffer more. The uke is an absolute brain dumb idiot, who despite getting the shit beat out him, keeps crawling back saying “my alpha, my mate” like bro he clearly don’t want you, LEAVE and screw everyone else because clearly your family didn’t want you to sign the marriage papers in the first place, you just wanted to feel like some type of savior going behind their backs. Even if he wasn’t their child he was still loved by them. And oh lord do I hate the Seme who is a literal man child. It’s understandable to be angry because who the fuck would be happy to be married off when your in a coma and r worded at that, but the way he treated the uke when the marriage wasn’t even fully his fault is crazy since the uke did it for his family not him. I think the main thing that kept pissing me off the most was how the uke kept coming back to the seme when he was clearly unwanted as a fated pair and after all the torture, but also the complete 180• the seme did out of no where suddenly wanting the uke after all the torture he put him through. Like make it make sense!!
I’m sorry for the rant, if you read all this, here’s a cookie #－.－)
I’m sorry, but I need to rant about this story, because it’s been so long since I’ve come across a story as shitty and disgustingly toxic as this one.
Now, I’m all for reading toxic shit, just take a look at my read list but holy hell this story is just beyond terrible.
We start off with uke R-ing the seme while he is in a literal coma (he could have restrained himself). Then later when the seme is well again he just starts to abuse the uke, smacking him, r-ing him, strangling him, and just overall beating him while the body guard just stands there and watches simply because the father said “as long as his womb is okay, you can do what you want”. Not to mention the seme trying to get the uke gangbanged by throwing a party in the house so he could watch him suffer more.
The uke is an absolute brain dumb idiot, who despite getting the shit beat out him, keeps crawling back saying “my alpha, my mate” like bro he clearly don’t want you, LEAVE and screw everyone else because clearly your family didn’t want you to sign the marriage papers in the first place, you just wanted to feel like some type of savior going behind their backs. Even if he wasn’t their child he was still loved by them.
And oh lord do I hate the Seme who is a literal man child. It’s understandable to be angry because who the fuck would be happy to be married off when your in a coma and r worded at that, but the way he treated the uke when the marriage wasn’t even fully his fault is crazy since the uke did it for his family not him.
I think the main thing that kept pissing me off the most was how the uke kept coming back to the seme when he was clearly unwanted as a fated pair and after all the torture, but also the complete 180• the seme did out of no where suddenly wanting the uke after all the torture he put him through. Like make it make sense!!
I’m sorry for the rant, if you read all this, here’s a cookie #－.－)