So I went through a good amount of the comments and I see mixed reactions but I literally see no one discussing how annoying and unlikeable Asaichi is. Before I continue, because since everyone wants to be a 'acshually!' person. Comment sections are for people to discuss their opinions and views whether they be negative or positive. So if someone reads something and wants to criticize or even complain they should be able to do that...just as if someone wants to praise the work and give compliments on it. On top of that people keep mentioning the authors name like someone supposed to give a fuck. Yes this is 'dark' and even 'LiGthHEr tHAn MOsT oF hIS woRKS', to which I enjoy reading such things but this...was just objectively bad? Like I don't know it had no real depth to it. It seemed like the author tried to make a captivating love story but just threw random things in it to make it more 'exciting/ interesting'? With that I'd like to say that I like to keep notes on characters and their actions just so I can complain about them later AND so I can make a proper analysis on them later. And yes Asaichi was annoying from the very start and to be real I don't even think Yoru had valid reason to like him in the first place. Just plain stupid. But ok this is just a story lets put that only silly thing to the side. But one thing I will NOT skip of is the fact that Asaichi and his bandmates LITERALLY planned to RAPE a group of girls. Like hello are we literally just gonna skip over that...? EVEN IF it 'seemed' consensual afterwards. I don't know maybe I'M the one tweaking out but did he not BLANTLY say they were going to switch and take rounds on the girls, when LITERALLY none of them discussed it before hand. Yes Yoru was confused but he sat there and said NOTHING and just watched as it happened...tf? And to add the fact that he literally rolled over to what he a assumed to be a girl(Yoru) and proposed anal and proceeded without hearing a single yes, ok, no NOTHING. But oh 'he was so confident on that stage that one time' BITCH DONT FUCKING PLAY WITH ME. That shit mad weak and is literally the lamest reason to 'love' someone. Get the fuck outta here. Not to mention Asaichi literally assaulting Yoru both verbally and physically MAD TIMES but then wanna boo-hoo cry when the same thing happens to him. Shut your bitch ass up. Whiny ass baby ass bitch. OH NOT TO MENTION the fact that Yoru gonna turn around and start STALKING Asaichi SIMPLY BECAUSE HE SAW HIM PREFORM ON A STAGE ONE FUCKING TIME?!!!!! THEY BOTH WEIRDOS. L main characters. I guess you can say the plot was a lil interesting so I give like a 5.3 outta 10. Also I give the art like a hmmmm 7.2 outta 10. Not bad but nothing too special. My personal fav character was Shiotori, her brother, and his lil assistant. So yes this was 'dark' but just wasn't objectively good. I also saw a lot of others comments clocking how bad this was so I'll just leave those points out.
So I went through a good amount of the comments and I see mixed reactions but I literally see no one discussing how annoying and unlikeable Asaichi is. Before I continue, because since everyone wants to be a 'acshually!' person. Comment sections are for people to discuss their opinions and views whether they be negative or positive. So if someone reads something and wants to criticize or even complain they should be able to do that...just as if someone wants to praise the work and give compliments on it. On top of that people keep mentioning the authors name like someone supposed to give a fuck. Yes this is 'dark' and even 'LiGthHEr tHAn MOsT oF hIS woRKS', to which I enjoy reading such things but this...was just objectively bad? Like I don't know it had no real depth to it. It seemed like the author tried to make a captivating love story but just threw random things in it to make it more 'exciting/ interesting'? With that I'd like to say that I like to keep notes on characters and their actions just so I can complain about them later AND so I can make a proper analysis on them later. And yes Asaichi was annoying from the very start and to be real I don't even think Yoru had valid reason to like him in the first place. Just plain stupid. But ok this is just a story lets put that only silly thing to the side. But one thing I will NOT skip of is the fact that Asaichi and his bandmates LITERALLY planned to RAPE a group of girls. Like hello are we literally just gonna skip over that...? EVEN IF it 'seemed' consensual afterwards. I don't know maybe I'M the one tweaking out but did he not BLANTLY say they were going to switch and take rounds on the girls, when LITERALLY none of them discussed it before hand. Yes Yoru was confused but he sat there and said NOTHING and just watched as it happened...tf? And to add the fact that he literally rolled over to what he a assumed to be a girl(Yoru) and proposed anal and proceeded without hearing a single yes, ok, no NOTHING. But oh 'he was so confident on that stage that one time' BITCH DONT FUCKING PLAY WITH ME. That shit mad weak and is literally the lamest reason to 'love' someone. Get the fuck outta here. Not to mention Asaichi literally assaulting Yoru both verbally and physically MAD TIMES but then wanna boo-hoo cry when the same thing happens to him. Shut your bitch ass up. Whiny ass baby ass bitch. OH NOT TO MENTION the fact that Yoru gonna turn around and start STALKING Asaichi SIMPLY BECAUSE HE SAW HIM PREFORM ON A STAGE ONE FUCKING TIME?!!!!! THEY BOTH WEIRDOS. L main characters. I guess you can say the plot was a lil interesting so I give like a 5.3 outta 10. Also I give the art like a hmmmm 7.2 outta 10. Not bad but nothing too special. My personal fav character was Shiotori, her brother, and his lil assistant. So yes this was 'dark' but just wasn't objectively good. I also saw a lot of others comments clocking how bad this was so I'll just leave those points out.