Art is pretty, you can’t deny. But the plot is missing so many things to make it stronger and more consistent. MC was treated absolutely terribly by the way…cannot forget he was basically raped and the ML allowed him to be. I’m not satisfied with the way things unfolded. I didn’t hate this, I personally love a misunderstanding trope and a little angst but this wasn’t the greatest because it wasn’t solved realistically. Story itself was too short for it to fully showcase the development of characters and their emotions but I get it, that’s just how it is..but doesn’t mean it can’t improve. I give this a 3/5 because it had potential. The plot idea itself was interesting, it’s just a lot of things felt misplaced and it had a lot of plot holes. It’s a good quick read if you want something easy that dabbles in a little bit of everything. It is not a good read if you dislike rape or MC being mistreated/neglected though I’d hope it’s the former you dislike more and not the latter…haha
Art is pretty, you can’t deny. But the plot is missing so many things to make it stronger and more consistent. MC was treated absolutely terribly by the way…cannot forget he was basically raped and the ML allowed him to be. I’m not satisfied with the way things unfolded. I didn’t hate this, I personally love a misunderstanding trope and a little angst but this wasn’t the greatest because it wasn’t solved realistically. Story itself was too short for it to fully showcase the development of characters and their emotions but I get it, that’s just how it is..but doesn’t mean it can’t improve. I give this a 3/5 because it had potential. The plot idea itself was interesting, it’s just a lot of things felt misplaced and it had a lot of plot holes. It’s a good quick read if you want something easy that dabbles in a little bit of everything. It is not a good read if you dislike rape or MC being mistreated/neglected though I’d hope it’s the former you dislike more and not the latter…haha