Personally, I finished this in 2 days but I think to avoid readers from getting bored and dropping this, they shouldn’t have put the kids’ story right after the parents’. I think it should have been a separate story because the parents’ storyline was the main story for half of it and so it should have ended after the second kid was born. And then have a connecting story for the kids’ story. Because it was merged together, the kids’ storyline seemed a bit rushed. Details of other things were missing and felt forced. For example, i loved how they had a baby sister but there was nothing about how she came to be or never showed the pregnancy at all. And this is not a big deal but just details that should have been there.
Personally, I finished this in 2 days but I think to avoid readers from getting bored and dropping this, they shouldn’t have put the kids’ story right after the parents’. I think it should have been a separate story because the parents’ storyline was the main story for half of it and so it should have ended after the second kid was born. And then have a connecting story for the kids’ story. Because it was merged together, the kids’ storyline seemed a bit rushed. Details of other things were missing and felt forced. For example, i loved how they had a baby sister but there was nothing about how she came to be or never showed the pregnancy at all. And this is not a big deal but just details that should have been there.