A bit of a letdown (rant lol)

Mel January 24, 2025 9:00 pm

It starts off so good, with space for character development for both MC and ML

But I really only see MC “improve”, yes in his own childish way, but he actually tries…
It feels like the ML is just looking down on him all the time, for no good reason either. And the one reason he had in the beginning was resolved but no real behavior change from him…
it doesn’t actually feel like the ML loves the MC.
It makes sense in the beginning because of how rocky their relationship starts off, but again there is no real change in behavior from ML. he just fucks the MC and then everything is good?? (If it was me my heart would be shattered) It felt like MC was the only one in love… :(

In the end their relationship just felt so cold especially because of ML and his overall rudeness… I really liked the MC and would have loved to see him in a loving and silly relationship! I love that type of character! But he was just unnecessarily hurt by ML so many times and there was no real “resolution” either!

I actually might have wanted MC to get together with the military nerd in the beginning! That would have been such a cute/unusual combo!! And would have given him that marriage and love that he wanted since the beginning :D (and the nerd seemed pretty aggressive in bed sooooo ^3^)

Responses
    GGrillll January 24, 2025 11:53 pm

    FOR REAL THO. The guy he went on a date is much better