It had cute moments, wholesome moments, tearjerking moments, but why the hell did it have rap3?! They both liked each other... maybe you know kiss - CONSENT! And as the chapters continued, why was it brought up over and over again!?? Was it meant to let the reader know how fucked up the top was left: after his parents deaths and the bottom's corpse's condition? There were too many loose strings: the commander of the theorist, the closed mind of the mc, what else the scientist came up with, what happened to the granny, etc. Also, was this meant to be the top's "Happy ending" while the world was flipped over? 5 out of 10. Nice art!
It had cute moments, wholesome moments, tearjerking moments, but why the hell did it have rap3?! They both liked each other... maybe you know kiss - CONSENT! And as the chapters continued, why was it brought up over and over again!?? Was it meant to let the reader know how fucked up the top was left: after his parents deaths and the bottom's corpse's condition?
There were too many loose strings: the commander of the theorist, the closed mind of the mc, what else the scientist came up with, what happened to the granny, etc. Also, was this meant to be the top's "Happy ending" while the world was flipped over? 5 out of 10. Nice art!