bleghh. and yay !

temy☘ January 23, 2025 5:48 pm

his nails... i could hardly focus on anything but his llewellyn's the entire time ughhh and it's never explained why they're so dark. even when he was young they looked like that and now that he's been out of Lute, they haven't gotten better. if anything, they got darker as the series progressed and i wish i knew why. + they were kissing/talking close to each other w onion breath. full body cringing, i'm never getting over it </3

decent story overall. i enjoyed the plot especially because it's unusual and unique, i haven't read anything quite like it. obsessive characters are my faaaaavorite. just adds flavor (not onion flavor...). my favorite quote was "all i want is for him to O:) again..." SO SWEET. i liked llewellyn's character a lot. i'm glad they got their happy ending. would i reread this ? probably not ! because the nails pissed me tf off.

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    #1 bihwan stan January 24, 2025 5:08 am

    tbf its mentioned in the story that lewellyns body doesnt produce odors & im sure shavonne doesnt give in to lewellyns antics THAT often.. its not like lewellyns the only one doing the cooking

    temy☘ January 24, 2025 7:14 am
    tbf its mentioned in the story that lewellyns body doesnt produce odors & im sure shavonne doesnt give in to lewellyns antics THAT often.. its not like lewellyns the only one doing the cooking #1 bihwan stan

    wait, where is it mentioned that he produces no odor ? i only saw that shavonne noticed llewellyn's clothes don't smell like onion even though he peels them all day. lol i was talking about the onion breath mostly when they were still in Lute together since i doubt hygiene wasn't a top priority there oral care has come a long way since the inspired time period

    Read_mlcd&orv January 24, 2025 7:52 am

    This is pretty valid, the nail part… in the novel they break his fingers and one of his foot jus for biting the warden so I’m assuming his nails got ripped off or damaged really often so they just became that way mostly it symbolizes how much he’s been tortured along w his scars and about the hygiene part… I also wish it was kinda explained more I never saw in the novel how lewellyn ate or used the bathroom so in reality it’s story logic lmao so in my mind there is no such thing as bad breathe or hygiene cause it doesn’t seem to exist

    Anightliver March 2, 2025 11:50 pm

    I heard the nails are not damaged by some bacteria (which is horrible) but actually by the people in prison who took it off, I don't know why the artist decided to make them like this but yeah it's pretty confusing