okay i dunno about u guys whether the mc is dumb or not has different reasons, but what i notice about this story was the storytelling itself. with chapter 1, everything was explained and detailed than a usual plot line, but what i kind of dont like with whats happening is that the mc will be busy telling us who is who and what is happening or what has happened. and we are bombarded with the mcs hindsight, i understand that every story does that. but somehow with her current pessimistic and passive aggressive attitude, somehow it feels overwhelming
okay i dunno about u guys whether the mc is dumb or not has different reasons, but what i notice about this story was the storytelling itself. with chapter 1, everything was explained and detailed than a usual plot line, but what i kind of dont like with whats happening is that the mc will be busy telling us who is who and what is happening or what has happened. and we are bombarded with the mcs hindsight, i understand that every story does that. but somehow with her current pessimistic and passive aggressive attitude, somehow it feels overwhelming