i loved this!! esp kai and the seme, saur cuteee. i don't have a problem with the uke sleeping around like he's an adult so go get that d. butttt, the 3P the author did was sooo unnecessary and out of the blue. seeing how the uke acts and has already got close to the seme around that time, it was verrryyyy unlikely he would actually sleep with someone tho he might look for someone bcs he was still in denial about his feelings but i can sense that he won't actually sleep with them esp how he's thinking about the seme. but the author went in and made a 3P scene hmp!! it just wasn't like him as a writer myself i can feel it in my guts that it wasn't the uke but the author made him do it.
i loved this!! esp kai and the seme, saur cuteee. i don't have a problem with the uke sleeping around like he's an adult so go get that d. butttt, the 3P the author did was sooo unnecessary and out of the blue. seeing how the uke acts and has already got close to the seme around that time, it was verrryyyy unlikely he would actually sleep with someone tho he might look for someone bcs he was still in denial about his feelings but i can sense that he won't actually sleep with them esp how he's thinking about the seme. but the author went in and made a 3P scene hmp!! it just wasn't like him as a writer myself i can feel it in my guts that it wasn't the uke but the author made him do it.