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I mean if they want to include that, include it after the comforting scene! like before he met the other hunters to talk about the great disaster seem a good time because things has calmed down a bit and people just expect them to only have boring preparation but then bam hot scene.
but now how we get back to the conforting and relaxing time with friends eating together at the restaurant. why would they feel comfortable eating with someone they have a hot-dream-but-actually-auhentic-future with.
If it's meant to be a side story why are we seeing it now it's disrupting the flow of the romance and the plot (each scene is multiple chapters too) and now I can't recommend this story to anyone irl either it's cooked