Whyyyyyy

cat January 22, 2025 2:14 pm

If it's meant to be a side story why are we seeing it now it's disrupting the flow of the romance and the plot (each scene is multiple chapters too) and now I can't recommend this story to anyone irl either it's cooked

Responses
    rkive January 22, 2025 2:33 pm

    idk what u expected reading a story with a yaoi tag?

    kirantine January 22, 2025 2:59 pm

    because of the sex? oh grow up if you want sfw all the way then rec the novel

    cat January 22, 2025 3:27 pm
    because of the sex? oh grow up if you want sfw all the way then rec the novel kirantine

    Did u read past where I said it disrupts the flow or..? Sorry that I wanted a good adaptation??? Lmao

    cat January 22, 2025 3:28 pm
    idk what u expected reading a story with a yaoi tag? rkive

    idk I expected it to follow the story as intended and for the scenes to actually make sense within the story mb! (I clearly have no problem w sex if u look at my reading list)

    Coco January 22, 2025 3:38 pm

    I get you! I know this part in the novel feel much nicer. It IS disrupting the flow and abrupt as well. They currently should feel depressed and slowly make it sweet and comforting by going to that restaurant together...

    Coco January 22, 2025 3:42 pm
    I get you! I know this part in the novel feel much nicer. It IS disrupting the flow and abrupt as well. They currently should feel depressed and slowly make it sweet and comforting by going to that restaurant t... Coco

    I mean if they want to include that, include it after the comforting scene! like before he met the other hunters to talk about the great disaster seem a good time because things has calmed down a bit and people just expect them to only have boring preparation but then bam hot scene.

    but now how we get back to the conforting and relaxing time with friends eating together at the restaurant. why would they feel comfortable eating with someone they have a hot-dream-but-actually-auhentic-future with.

    cat January 22, 2025 4:01 pm
    I mean if they want to include that, include it after the comforting scene! like before he met the other hunters to talk about the great disaster seem a good time because things has calmed down a bit and people... Coco

    Yeah which is why it's super confusing because they're feelings had barely develop atp and suddenly they're shown this future where they hook up and it's supposed to go back to the present romance progression??? I haven't read the novel but it's definitely jarring regardless

    Coco January 22, 2025 4:18 pm
    Yeah which is why it's super confusing because they're feelings had barely develop atp and suddenly they're shown this future where they hook up and it's supposed to go back to the present romance progression??... cat

    I actually only read around that part of the novel after that sudden first dream lol. because I want to feel the real pacing from the novel.

    kirantine January 22, 2025 5:16 pm
    Yeah which is why it's super confusing because they're feelings had barely develop atp and suddenly they're shown this future where they hook up and it's supposed to go back to the present romance progression??... cat

    iirc someone said this happened in the extra but around this timeframe, wc is why mc and ml get a clue to get together. so in this case it's just shuffling the events in linear order