pacing

⊙.☉ January 20, 2025 11:39 am

the story is actually so good, it's just the pacing is so fast they left out so many characters developments and disregarded some room for improvement. Also the plot twist that the chief was actually a raksha (? idk the spelling) is kind of out of nowhere if you ask me but not necessarily wrong. It just it would be better if they deliver it slower

BUT ASIDE FROM THAT ITS ACTUALLY SO GOOD RAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH "My eden" bro it broke me

Responses
    kirran January 20, 2025 11:45 am

    I love this so much and agreed, I'm so scared of the pacing because they gloss over characters abilities which really sucks (the darkness user was my favorite). I'm hoping it'll make sense later and its refreshing seeing action manwha thats not a game/novel or recarnating.

    ⊙.☉ January 20, 2025 11:52 am
    I love this so much and agreed, I'm so scared of the pacing because they gloss over characters abilities which really sucks (the darkness user was my favorite). I'm hoping it'll make sense later and its refresh... kirran

    reallll, like I feel like the other characters have so much potential and they also have cool abilities and they are being overlooked