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I will say that I feel like this is great so far because I am the exact opposite of a character like Jun but I'm enjoying reading his perspective even if I don't like his morals. I think it's good storytelling when I can both hate the type of person a protagonist is while still rooting for him as his own character because truly he hasn't done anything wrong. It's not wrong to hate others especially when you're going through so much emotional turmoil yourself
This is the fabled love triangle isn't it? Like the actual one where each arrow points to the next vertex. Our boy likes douche, douche likes kiddo, kiddo likes our boy. It's an actual love triangle and tbh this is a great execution of it, I'm enjoying seeing our mc get fed up with the situation