My thoughts...

LiyahQ January 18, 2025 3:46 pm

Spoilers!!







I'm guessing that a lot of people dislikes the ML cause he's the way he introduced their relationship... like he's into dom/sub, which is okay, but the way he brouught it up while they were having s#x was messed up. No safe words, previous talks about it, or even a chance for the Mc to get on board. Ot was just "you don't like it, call me master and I'll stop. He's also hiding something from his past.

Before all that ML and MC's bedroom time was way off. There were times where I was reading while the smut was smutting and I felt like I a responsible adult should be called. Cause the Mc was not on board. Even when he was in heat the ML flew off the handle with the master behavior. Oh and the "fever medication" was nasty work

Plus the miscommunication and all that jealousy is bond to cause a big problem down the road, like in the last chapter where the ML is clearly pissed and used s#x to vent

And don't get me started in the SML, he's a piece if work on his own, kissing someone who's asleep is not okay. They grew up together and he had all the time to confess yet only chose to say something when Mc finds someone (messy as ML is) and that's just the tip of SML behavior

Great art and all, smut is okay if you don't have a conscience or if you're just in it for the smut. The only thing that makes this story good is the fact that the ML isn't a total trash bag Alpha...yet. oh and don't expect the Mc to question anything. He's has the common sense of a hatchling with zero survival skills

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