Could’ve been written better.

kiko January 18, 2025 1:37 am

I’m at chapter 40 right now and I only picked this up for the baby here are some of my takes about this manhwa.

First of all, I wish they didn't move on too quickly when a problem arises. It could've been addressed properly and displayed the aftermath realistically since MC has been a lot okay? It's too much to the point it's like the author throwing random typical traumatic a/b/o experiences to widen the plot when it already is. Like there are already multiple problems but adding and adding more without resolving such things with sense? Idk.

The plot. If it wasn't for the unnecessary scenes or so, I’d find this plot unique and good It was my cup of tea for a moment.

I don't know there's honestly a lot to say when it comes to couple and side couple, to the family and ML’s mysterious background, and more. But I’ll just stop here and continue if there are any specific changes

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