I know this is purposely written to be dark and all, but i think it's really badly written...

Sazz January 17, 2025 11:00 am

I know this is purposely written to be dark and all, but i think it's really badly written, to the point i can't enjoy it. Their dialogues are certainly not intelligent, ml who is supposed to be cunning and smart, can actually easily get humbled, it was really frustrating seeing fl getting so easily swing around by him. He's not smart and the things he says can easily be turned against him, to the point i want to scream when fl doesn't take the opportunity. I've read black flag romance before, where fl truly gets cornered by ml, without any opportunities to fight back, so this story is pretty mid to me.

Responses
    userao1 January 18, 2025 6:00 pm

    WAIT CAN U GIVE ME SOME RECCS PLS

    Forestella January 21, 2025 7:48 am

    Give us recsssss

    userao1 January 22, 2025 5:23 am
    Give us recsssss Forestella

    Right hahha

    Karmilla January 22, 2025 3:27 pm

    Me tooo, give recs

    Kon January 24, 2025 10:05 am

    Recssss pleaseeeee ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄

    nameless passerby January 24, 2025 8:35 pm

    don't be all talk REVEAL THAT "have read before" novels or whatever you're saying cause imma judge if it's real lmao

    So far there's only a few smartly written story I've read. One is bl genre then the rest are real historical books lmao

    I'm interested so drop the name or link.

    btw Bridgerton series is well written as well but seems the adaptation kinda butchering it. It's one of my wildest fantasy to read a book like Bridgerton but darker like literal killer vibes
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    Sazz January 24, 2025 9:20 pm
    don't be all talk REVEAL THAT "have read before" novels or whatever you're saying cause imma judge if it's real lmaoSo far there's only a few smartly written story I've read. One is bl genre then the rest are r... nameless passerby

    Blood and gold fanfiction by ObsidianPen
    If i can't have you by Deathsdoll (OG book in ao3)
    The community by Deathsdoll (OG book in ao3)
    Formless bl webtoon and novel (in the novel it's more clear how ml conditions mc to depend on him)
    Through a glass, darkly by nenia cambell
    And MAAANY more which do not come to mind right now and i don't feel like searching my history. There are countless talented authors in the world which make the dialogues and world building in this story seem like a joke.

    Congratulations, you coaxed these out of me (manipulative little shit).

    For more, consult the dark romance and yandere male subs on reddit.

    Pretty sure there are plenty of smartly written, as you so nicely put it, manhwa as well(even Matthias from cry even better if you beg is smarter than this ml based on the novel). They simply do not come to mind right now, i've read too many things.

    Now kindly STOP PESTERING ME AND SEARCH BY YOURSELF.

    The end.

    nameless passerby January 24, 2025 10:01 pm
    Blood and gold fanfiction by ObsidianPenIf i can't have you by Deathsdoll (OG book in ao3)The community by Deathsdoll (OG book in ao3)Formless bl webtoon and novel (in the novel it's more clear how ml condition... Sazz

    Thanks. Now I have reason to lock myself yet again in my room hehe