Stopping at ch17

Thatperson January 17, 2025 9:02 am

This is the first time I tried reading manhua (is it a manhua? Im not sure hehe)

And the story’s good but the storytelling is what gets me :(( its so clunky and the characters all seem… shallow.
The conversations doesnt flow well, the transition to another arc/story also isn’t executed well.
This may just be the style of all other manhuas and maybe most of the readers are fine with this.

But not for me, i prefer a bad with good storytelling, rather than a good story with bad storytelling.

Honestly, the art and story is really good! I wouldnt drop this if ever, but I just couldn’t read it anymore because the characters all seem so… shallow and surface level persona :((

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