excluding the constant rape

fingerblaster_800 January 16, 2025 11:01 pm

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this rlly got nothing going on at all. i even went ahead to read the raws and still nothing has happened like the only "big reveal" rn is that glasses guy is also a victim when it was so fucking obvious considering hes the only "okay" person in that room (also the only relevant twink)

theres so much dialogue and [inner] monologues that reveal absolutely nothing abt anything (characters, backgrounds, etc) other than whats been obvious or whats been said/implied and half of the mc's monologues is just him sucking his own dick.

mc is such a fucking edgelord n i get why but theres better ways to write an emo guy. the main side characters are also fucking boring idk how to explain it

im convinced the author was just bored asf when writing this and the entire story was to get them out of writer's block

Responses
    Takabaka January 18, 2025 8:53 pm

    I agree like sometimes authors brain puke out anytjing just to get out of a slump

    Kope January 19, 2025 4:23 am

    So does the glasses guy help mc?? Was he the one who took the pics?? Can u spoil his story too

    Takabaka January 19, 2025 7:04 am
    So does the glasses guy help mc?? Was he the one who took the pics?? Can u spoil his story too Kope

    Yeah I need to know this, knowing he was one of the other victims like is he trying to help him? How did he get out? Was he forced to take the pics??

    fingerblaster_800 January 20, 2025 3:14 am
    Yeah I need to know this, knowing he was one of the other victims like is he trying to help him? How did he get out? Was he forced to take the pics?? Takabaka

    no he doesnt help mc instead hes forced to also rape mc (idk why and idc) however mc finds some dirt on him and ig hes going to help him in the future?? (idk hangul or korean)

    fingerblaster_800 January 20, 2025 3:15 am
    So does the glasses guy help mc?? Was he the one who took the pics?? Can u spoil his story too Kope

    no he doesnt help mc instead hes forced to also rape mc (idk why and idc) however mc finds some dirt on him and ig hes going to help him in the future?? (idk hangul or korean) read the novel for more detail cuz im not going to read it