. . . . . . . . . . . this rlly got nothing going on at all. i even went ahead to read the raws and still nothing has happened like the only "big reveal" rn is that glasses guy is also a victim when it was so fucking obvious considering hes the only "okay" person in that room (also the only relevant twink)
theres so much dialogue and [inner] monologues that reveal absolutely nothing abt anything (characters, backgrounds, etc) other than whats been obvious or whats been said/implied and half of the mc's monologues is just him sucking his own dick.
mc is such a fucking edgelord n i get why but theres better ways to write an emo guy. the main side characters are also fucking boring idk how to explain it
im convinced the author was just bored asf when writing this and the entire story was to get them out of writer's block
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this rlly got nothing going on at all. i even went ahead to read the raws and still nothing has happened like the only "big reveal" rn is that glasses guy is also a victim when it was so fucking obvious considering hes the only "okay" person in that room (also the only relevant twink)
theres so much dialogue and [inner] monologues that reveal absolutely nothing abt anything (characters, backgrounds, etc) other than whats been obvious or whats been said/implied and half of the mc's monologues is just him sucking his own dick.
mc is such a fucking edgelord n i get why but theres better ways to write an emo guy. the main side characters are also fucking boring idk how to explain it
im convinced the author was just bored asf when writing this and the entire story was to get them out of writer's block