The first half is weird like too fast? The sex Too rush? Idk how to describe it.. it just feels weird to read. The second half however is just correct not perfect but at least its understandable it intends to give backstory to the seme. (Forgive english no good).
The first half is weird like too fast? The sex Too rush? Idk how to describe it.. it just feels weird to read. The second half however is just correct not perfect but at least its understandable it intends to give backstory to the seme. (Forgive english no good).