I'm realizing that I'm no longer as into the story as I first was... I usually think it's funny when an MC is basically jealous of themselves, but with her it just annoyed me. Especially because of the way she basically assaulted him from start to finish that first time. I stuck around because he clearly was hostile toward her, but she's making light of it and being jealous like she has any right to. I like my characters to make more sense than that. Or to at least jive with the parts of me that makes me fall in love with them. I was really looking forward to a cool vampire story too, so it just sucks. Anyway, that's my two cent.
I'm realizing that I'm no longer as into the story as I first was... I usually think it's funny when an MC is basically jealous of themselves, but with her it just annoyed me. Especially because of the way she basically assaulted him from start to finish that first time. I stuck around because he clearly was hostile toward her, but she's making light of it and being jealous like she has any right to. I like my characters to make more sense than that. Or to at least jive with the parts of me that makes me fall in love with them. I was really looking forward to a cool vampire story too, so it just sucks. Anyway, that's my two cent.