i actually find the premise and the plot super interesting. i have a soft spot for brocon relationships and hunterverse so i was all in it. The art is already pretty good, i love the semes eyes particularly but the lack of time truly did show here. The whole pacing is an absolute mess like- so much could be done, the first 15 ch truly did feel like the beginning of it all (i hate that they fucked for the first time on the dungeon tho after seeing the corpse mygoodness was that jarring) but the side story just lacked so much still im glad that this was explored. solid 3.5/5 stars, rip author-nim
i actually find the premise and the plot super interesting. i have a soft spot for brocon relationships and hunterverse so i was all in it.
The art is already pretty good, i love the semes eyes particularly but the lack of time truly did show here. The whole pacing is an absolute mess like- so much could be done, the first 15 ch truly did feel like the beginning of it all (i hate that they fucked for the first time on the dungeon tho after seeing the corpse mygoodness was that jarring) but the side story just lacked so much still im glad that this was explored. solid 3.5/5 stars, rip author-nim