Story a lil nonsensical but it’s chill so I fwi

chul1s January 15, 2025 5:30 am

The art is super pretty which is most of the reasons why i still kept a strong will but sometimes I find some stuff that has me like,,, hold on???


For example and to start (yeah to start-) she’s mute but when she’s talking to Lloyd she uses her mouth. I noticed in one chapter where she’s with others and she mouths to him, everyone else is able to “understand” what she’s saying despite her back being turned? Like they acknowledge what she says and laugh or turn sad, etc.


This also occurs when she’s using her note cards and the note card is completely on the other side of a person. Like when she was “confronting” that knight in the early chapters and the maid behind her starts chuckling.


This doesn’t become a big deal to me though cuz I just imagine someone stops the room and is like, ohoho and reads off the lil girls note card to the room.


The second part is where she’s using mind telepathy in her wedding and then has another set of thought hurts explaining how she got off on tricking him… like girl..


Not just that but some spots I’m just like… pick me? But then I’m like no no no she’s got the mentality of a little girl despite living to maybe 18-20s? Due to her trauma and all so I’m trying to be understanding. Aside from that I think it’s a sort of feel good story after and I definitely shed tears so a good in my book.˚✧₊⁎❝≀ˍ ❝⁎⁺˳✧༚

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    chul1s January 15, 2025 5:33 am

    not me going on a rant… whoops- Σ(-_-๑)