Idk, I feel like something about the structure of the story could be written better. Like the art is good. MC back story is decent...and why we are in this current situation is alrigh. But I always feel like there are pieces in-between of how we got to one point to another is missing. Like the chapters are chopped and pieces are missing. Idk. I still like the story tho, the ML is a cutie. I hope he can convince the MC to want to keep living.
Idk, I feel like something about the structure of the story could be written better. Like the art is good. MC back story is decent...and why we are in this current situation is alrigh. But I always feel like there are pieces in-between of how we got to one point to another is missing. Like the chapters are chopped and pieces are missing. Idk. I still like the story tho, the ML is a cutie. I hope he can convince the MC to want to keep living.