It started off as funny. Then became really creepy. The ML was detestable. But then, instead of improving him, the author just wrote another ML. It was the same guy, but different personality, so the redemption ark didn’t really happen. He became an angel so it was hard to hate on him, i still hate the one from the first chapters though, haha. The story had potential and it was fairly enjoyable to read in some ways, but it lacked in many ways too. The author needs to learn how to draw babies and kids though. And some stuff about their development too
It started off as funny. Then became really creepy. The ML was detestable. But then, instead of improving him, the author just wrote another ML. It was the same guy, but different personality, so the redemption ark didn’t really happen. He became an angel so it was hard to hate on him, i still hate the one from the first chapters though, haha. The story had potential and it was fairly enjoyable to read in some ways, but it lacked in many ways too. The author needs to learn how to draw babies and kids though. And some stuff about their development too