Wtf is this story even? We get HALF a chapter which shows Miles trying to win the ML over ...

Randomreader-.- January 12, 2025 10:07 pm

Wtf is this story even? We get HALF a chapter which shows Miles trying to win the ML over (yes the story says 3 years but for the reader its way to short to get into the story when he’s doing a complete 180 by the end of ONE chapter). Als the ML catches feelings as soon as he gives up; no leading reason, no explanation, no situation happening? You mean to tell me all it took for him to fall in love was him not buying his breakfast and skipping lunch for once in 3 years made him fall in love? Also 0 realism that the whole world in the story is gay? Also Miles just all of a sudden overnight became a baddie with all the selfrespect? I usually never drop anything but this literally had me cooking a couple chapters in.

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