This feels like a story that has all the trappings of an interesting plot but doesn't quit...

Mayo Nessa January 11, 2025 5:30 am

This feels like a story that has all the trappings of an interesting plot but doesn't quite execute it effectively enough that the reader feels like they missed something along the way.

One thing I've noticed about the MC is she somehow comes off as disingenuous. Even with the manhwa showing us her growth in this world, it just feels so surface level for some reason. Doesn't help that all the characters seem to be pandering to her existence. I can't explain it well but everybody in this story feels heavily reliant on what the MC chooses to do. It doesn't really feel like every individual has a choice and they all fall in line with what their characters are supposed to do in the story - if that makes sense.

I suppose in that way it makes sense. As much as MC says she made this world, everything does come off as an outline story rather than events organically falling into place.

Y'all, am I even making sense?

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