Responses
Ahh nice reflection and consideration on his part in 34 and 35. I guess this is how we get to see his character development.
(*>∀<*) heh I completely forgot about the 'think something holy' 'self control' bit in chapter 38. It's nice to see him try to control himself for his wife. I'm glad that there was fast and obvious character development for him
So I'm re-reading and there's something about their first night that bothers me (ch 20). Just the fact that he hurts woman in bed even if it's not their first time and thinks that it's normal... it shouldn't hurt if you're doing it right. He also didn't give much warning before jamming it in there. Not a very considerate partner. Now if her has some otherworldly shlong that's just so damn big that's it's unavoidable to cause harm, that would be different.
There's just so much about the scene that isn't the best that I could go on for a while and I don't think you all want to read about me talking about woman's anatomy or how that affects intercorse.