This is my opinion

Me_for_ president January 10, 2025 10:30 pm

I love Lost in the Cloud and think it’s very well written. Paskim is an amazing author, but I felt the ending was a bit rushed, leaving some unanswered questions. For example, the relationship between Cirrus and Rin felt unresolved. While she might be a side character, she’s an important part of Cirrus’ life, considering they were best friends for most of their lives. Their falling out was significant, yet the story never shows them reconciling or finding closure, which left their relationship feeling incomplete. We can just assume but overall I think the end could’ve been better. I am no way throwing shade Paskim again she’s a great author, and I understand that she has many health issues which I do think could play in the fact that the story felt just a little rushed.

Responses
    Nobodyhome January 10, 2025 11:39 pm

    The story actually alludes to Ri-In/Cirrus’ reconciliation in ch 129 when Cirrus takes the 1st step towards the reconciliation and gifts her a box of chocolates and on it a post-it note encouraging her for her exams. So it’s implied looking by her surprised gaze and everything else that they rekindled.

    As a writer the author herself follows a different approach in her story: in some parts of the story she prefers to let actions talk rather an exhaustive detailed dialogue and scene. And personally I find it pretty cool.

    On the other hand, if after the break the writer decides to throw some side stories all these “tiny details” some people wanna see maybe will be fulfilled in there.

    For instance, I wanted to see more on the Cirrus/father’s relationship front. And see if in the end his father might redeem himself.

    Me_for_ president January 11, 2025 5:54 am
    The story actually alludes to Ri-In/Cirrus’ reconciliation in ch 129 when Cirrus takes the 1st step towards the reconciliation and gifts her a box of chocolates and on it a post-it note encouraging her for he... Nobodyhome

    Yeah, but I would have liked to see them rekindle their friendship since they are supposed to be best friends and someone who is very close to him. Also, the way they left off their friendship felt unresolved. This is just kind of my opinion, but I still very much love this story. (▰˘◡˘▰)