it was very interesting! i was pleasantly surprised that the big reveal wasn’t that kieth was half a vampire but instead had an even darker twist…i’m still processing that…but anyways i thought it was a fun read, the pacing was alright up until the introduction of the main villain rachel and i think this is where my issue lies. yes the pacing after this was really poor, a lot of plot points were brought up with little to no explanation. there were things i wished we’d been shown or maybe explained in depth, like we never got to see a V1, V2, or V3 vampire! at first i thought perhaps rachel would be some kind of V, but no…so why introduce the the V classification if you weren’t gonna use it? and for a main villain who’s boss fight was hyped for a few chapters, she sure did go down super fast…
i’ll say this one last thing but i absolutely adore “black cat x golden retriever” or “grumpy x sunshine” (or whtv you want to call it) relationships a whole lot, it’s like my fave relationship type so i lapped up the two love interests interactions a lot! despite what others say i liked the slow burn, but i will say it was a tad unbelievable that shin recognized his feelings so fast after the confession. i thought we’d get some more courting, some more denial, some more passionate tension…i was also hoping for keith to be tested more and have deeper character development, like maybe being kicked out of the family and having his resources and stuff revoked? i mean, his brother did say “i won’t forget this’. i thought maybe something like that could have really tested shin and keith’s relationship, as it would teach keith how to rely on his own for realll after no longer being able to use his family name, and maybe shin would be more comfortable seeing keith as his ‘equal’ since i don’t think shin would’ve been too comfortable dating a wealthy person…know what i mean?
woah, lots of nitpicks here…all in all i enjoyed the story, but i believe the author had a deadline to make that things couldn’t be explained in more depth. i actually didn’t mind the progression of the love story being sidelined some for the plot, but i guess im a little unsatisfied because in the end the plot wasn’t very well developed either…
it was very interesting! i was pleasantly surprised that the big reveal wasn’t that kieth was half a vampire but instead had an even darker twist…i’m still processing that…but anyways i thought it was a fun read, the pacing was alright up until the introduction of the main villain rachel and i think this is where my issue lies. yes the pacing after this was really poor, a lot of plot points were brought up with little to no explanation. there were things i wished we’d been shown or maybe explained in depth, like we never got to see a V1, V2, or V3 vampire! at first i thought perhaps rachel would be some kind of V, but no…so why introduce the the V classification if you weren’t gonna use it? and for a main villain who’s boss fight was hyped for a few chapters, she sure did go down super fast…
i’ll say this one last thing but i absolutely adore “black cat x golden retriever” or “grumpy x sunshine” (or whtv you want to call it) relationships a whole lot, it’s like my fave relationship type so i lapped up the two love interests interactions a lot! despite what others say i liked the slow burn, but i will say it was a tad unbelievable that shin recognized his feelings so fast after the confession. i thought we’d get some more courting, some more denial, some more passionate tension…i was also hoping for keith to be tested more and have deeper character development, like maybe being kicked out of the family and having his resources and stuff revoked? i mean, his brother did say “i won’t forget this’. i thought maybe something like that could have really tested shin and keith’s relationship, as it would teach keith how to rely on his own for realll after no longer being able to use his family name, and maybe shin would be more comfortable seeing keith as his ‘equal’ since i don’t think shin would’ve been too comfortable dating a wealthy person…know what i mean?
woah, lots of nitpicks here…all in all i enjoyed the story, but i believe the author had a deadline to make that things couldn’t be explained in more depth. i actually didn’t mind the progression of the love story being sidelined some for the plot, but i guess im a little unsatisfied because in the end the plot wasn’t very well developed either…