Their first time was in the toilet, while on a company drinking night...and they did it raw and uke was drunk af. At one point seme rapes uke and even acknowledges it during the act...and yet they don't care and have sex one more time.
They fell for each other without even having a proper conversation once. If you don't want to deal with the whole getting to know each other part of the couple, then maybe start the story with an established relationship or idk
This probably could've been good, but...
The whole fairy thing was weird and unnecessary
Their first time was in the toilet, while on a company drinking night...and they did it raw and uke was drunk af.
At one point seme rapes uke and even acknowledges it during the act...and yet they don't care and have sex one more time.
They fell for each other without even having a proper conversation once. If you don't want to deal with the whole getting to know each other part of the couple, then maybe start the story with an established relationship or idk