what the hell??

mckeekmb January 9, 2025 1:15 am

every chapter from 1-10 have cut half the scenes jumping to entirely different scene. Like cutting off all the juicy parts and doing a 180 the following page out of nowhere. Like chapter 10 he was showing he refusing them walking out, got his cat then doing juicy scene with the juicy guy, then it cuts off jumping to where he is no sitting infront of the little girl again and looks like accepting.. every chapters are not finishing the actual story of that chapter and doing pieces. Every chapters pages seem all out of place....not worth reading this crap

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    Eznal January 16, 2025 11:03 am

    Yeah the story is rambling