Just adding stuff in just for the thrill of it I guess

Krissy January 8, 2025 6:23 pm

There are too many points that aren’t connecting properly in this story. The bully girl’s older brother and his illegal boxing, the antagonist who reminds me of the girl from Pyramid Game and her weird grandfather who’s built their school, and now we have the drivers son and the princess. There are too many plot leads that just aren’t leading anywhere.

Responses
    rina January 10, 2025 5:46 am

    bro we are less than 30 chaps in, let’s let the plot cook a bit then talk about where they’re going

    Krissy January 10, 2025 10:48 am
    bro we are less than 30 chaps in, let’s let the plot cook a bit then talk about where they’re going rina

    Yeah I’m definitely putting this on pause. 30 chapters and all we keep getting are flashbacks for background characters. When I started this and saw her watching the sword fighting on tv I just knew we were about to get a kickass sports webtoon.

    Blackcat January 12, 2025 12:40 pm

    Omg are you dumb its obviously going to go somewhere and probably have a lot of chapters

    Krissy January 12, 2025 1:30 pm
    Omg are you dumb its obviously going to go somewhere and probably have a lot of chapters Blackcat

    “Probably have a lot of chapters” does not equate to plot, but I’m not surprised that you don’t know that.

    Blackcat January 12, 2025 5:49 pm
    “Probably have a lot of chapters” does not equate to plot, but I’m not surprised that you don’t know that. Krissy

    Krissy excuse me

    Blackcat January 12, 2025 5:53 pm
    “Probably have a lot of chapters” does not equate to plot, but I’m not surprised that you don’t know that. Krissy

    No but like fr i think it will in the end go somewhere and its suppossed to slowly show the Reader how the schools hierarchy has been build but idk im kinda waiting for more chapters to judge