I mean I liked how the story was progressing, but I really really wish they would’ve expanded more on his reason for being as jumpy as he was on relationships and his personality. It’s kind of to a detriment to the story - I’ll expand a bit more in the bottom with spoilers - but like without it, he just seems really closed off even as a reader. Aside from that, the story was very ok. I can’t give it like an amazing review but it was a decent read.
The ML goes from 0 to a 100 with no real reason?
Like I LIKE U SO IF U LEAVE ME ILL KMS? (But In smaller more condensed version than other BL tropes) Hm ok, but why? You didn’t really seem to like him that much even a bit ago.
*spoilers* And even with his small trauma explanation it doesn’t seem like it’s expanded on. Like, tbh as the reader u can do more digging urself and maybe have ur own theorizing as to why he was the way he was. The terrorizing from his nanny, the semi neglectful reactions from his parents (even tho it seems like the teetered at times), his incapability to handle his own emotions, but at the end these are all just theories cuz she was just a passing thing? Nothing else is brought upon this and it’s like well… I guess his trauma made him not wanna be steady with anyone ig.
And an entire personal gripe - I did not like the other ML’s chasing, like yeah he seemed to show some extent that he like you, but at some point pick urself off the ground ur not setting a good example to others rn :/ I mean good fr u that he did come back.
I mean I liked how the story was progressing, but I really really wish they would’ve expanded more on his reason for being as jumpy as he was on relationships and his personality. It’s kind of to a detriment to the story - I’ll expand a bit more in the bottom with spoilers - but like without it, he just seems really closed off even as a reader. Aside from that, the story was very ok. I can’t give it like an amazing review but it was a decent read.
The ML goes from 0 to a 100 with no real reason?
Like I LIKE U SO IF U LEAVE ME ILL KMS? (But In smaller more condensed version than other BL tropes)
Hm ok, but why?
You didn’t really seem to like him that much even a bit ago.
*spoilers*
And even with his small trauma explanation it doesn’t seem like it’s expanded on. Like, tbh as the reader u can do more digging urself and maybe have ur own theorizing as to why he was the way he was. The terrorizing from his nanny, the semi neglectful reactions from his parents (even tho it seems like the teetered at times), his incapability to handle his own emotions, but at the end these are all just theories cuz she was just a passing thing?
Nothing else is brought upon this and it’s like well… I guess his trauma made him not wanna be steady with anyone ig.
And an entire personal gripe - I did not like the other ML’s chasing, like yeah he seemed to show some extent that he like you, but at some point pick urself off the ground ur not setting a good example to others rn :/ I mean good fr u that he did come back.