thats f ed up the pacing so much I love this story but that is way too abrupt of a change in tone, I do read explicit stories but it just doesn't make sense to make it SO explicit so suddenly like this. If it was more sfw and it got spicier gradually I'd understand but I feel like I just got slapped in the face with a dck (⊙…⊙ ) or at least make it spicy from the start (I obvs still love the plot)
thats f ed up the pacing so much I love this story but that is way too abrupt of a change in tone, I do read explicit stories but it just doesn't make sense to make it SO explicit so suddenly like this. If it was more sfw and it got spicier gradually I'd understand but I feel like I just got slapped in the face with a dck (⊙…⊙ ) or at least make it spicy from the start (I obvs still love the plot)