eh… i’m not feeling it y’all—3 stars out of 5.

xylophone January 7, 2025 4:21 pm

i’m gonna get downvoted but it is what is. not much happened throughout the story besides them discussing their secondary gender & discovering their feelings for one another. sometimes healthy stories like these are great within this space, but they can lack dynamic storylines, which causes them to fall flat.

also, i don’t like them being stuck in one location. i would love to see them go to the dom’s house or hang out at the park to show us how much time they’re spending together outside of school. overall, i wasn’t feeling the love within their relationship & i would’ve been okay with them not having sex or becoming lovers.

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    Zrekq January 10, 2025 5:27 pm

    I love this work sm, but i also was feeling this T ^ T i wish they'd have made more chapters with both of them understanding each other more and gradually becoming closer in the process