ok so

Elyon January 7, 2025 4:51 am

the translation isn't bad it's just the pacing and storybeats are so poor. the transitions aren't very clean and the writing feels like the characters know more than we do which isnt great for this kind of story.

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    小松 March 20, 2025 3:36 am

    i think the translation is trash, bcos why are their pronouns most of the time. it looks like it’s AI generated or sumthn