It had everything to be good. A nice premise, gorgeous art holy shit, green flag seme, tou...

Moon January 6, 2025 9:35 pm

It had everything to be good. A nice premise, gorgeous art holy shit, green flag seme, tough uke.

But the story just… didn’t do anything? It fell flat. It felt like the author wanted to put everything in all at once but couldn’t come up with the justification for things. Like, he loves the uke but we don’t know why? And then the reveal that they’re brothers that lasted for 1 chapter, that doesn’t do anything other than letting us know the seme knows the mother. And the backstory arent explained at all? why?

Phenomenal art style tho, I’m obsessed. I hope the author has other works.

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