Responses
I thought I was crazy the translation is so bad that I give up, I’m dropping this.
You’re not crazy. I thought I was having a stroke. Things would kind of make sense then become nonsense so seamlessly. It’s so bad. I can’t tell if the story is bad or if I’m just missing crucial context.
I re-read from the beginning since it’s been a while and *phew*. I don’t normally complain about poor translations, but I feel like I’m misunderstanding A LOT of crucial dialog that’s making the actions and motivations of the characters unclear. The FL falling and the commanders not helping her, then getting in trouble….wtf was going on? The FL is weirdly compliant and no one seems bright, but the jumbled MTL’d dialog isn’t helping that. If you’re going to use MTL, do a little editing please.