random sex scenes

707 January 4, 2025 4:40 am

bro why are the scenes of them jorking it is just straight up random. like i like the sports aspect of the story but holy shit the romance of the the story is just all over the place. we didn't even get to see them like confess and shit and the next chapter is just them jorking. like what?? it would be nice if the romance was a bit more conscise because they are really interesting characters. i would like it more if the romance was built more in order, really thought the payoff of their relationship would be much more fruitful ngl

Responses
    xxkurokoxx January 4, 2025 6:05 am

    I think it’s future them? I feel like the author is pressured to add sex scenes so the author is like going back and forth between showing us glimpses of the future and then having sec

    Leon January 4, 2025 6:08 am

    Random… It’s a type of story telling. I’m amazed people ask this a lot. Chronological order is not the only kind

    xxkurokoxx January 4, 2025 6:12 am
    Random… It’s a type of story telling. I’m amazed people ask this a lot. Chronological order is not the only kind Leon

    Yes, but the only thing is it’s not really adding to the story atm, except showing us they are together in the future and in a relationship where they have sex. So I can see why ppl are calling it random - it feels almost out of the place with the current storyline.

    707 January 4, 2025 7:15 am
    I think it’s future them? I feel like the author is pressured to add sex scenes so the author is like going back and forth between showing us glimpses of the future and then having sec xxkurokoxx

    makes sense, but i don't know maybe its because it feels kinda off (?) at where its placed. Because when i saw the first one, it made sense because they gave a bit of context but the next one? the timelines threw me off lol

    외톨이 January 4, 2025 10:09 am
    makes sense, but i don't know maybe its because it feels kinda off (?) at where its placed. Because when i saw the first one, it made sense because they gave a bit of context but the next one? the timelines thr... 707

    honestly I like this better than rushing the storyline, it's better than changing the pacing of the story js to show "fan service" scenes