Conflicted

Like partially i can't get enough of the fact this may be this FIRST bdsm story I have ever seen where not only there's a contract but they actually follow through w it and the sub actually uses the safewords and safesignal when he's at his limit and therefore it's completely consensual
On the other hand it's SO rigid like idk I get its start while he's on break and basically spends most of his time inside but there's like no plot outside their plays. Also their contact on the leads part it's so uncomfortable like I understand its technically a love triangle and not a trouple but this whole "he's my bf for the week and you can't touch him" like idk it would be better if it was smth like they take priority over the other on their week
I also lowk hate that they compete w eachother at the expense of the MC bc they make it sexual and are constantly putting more and more pressure on him emotionally and physically and the MC can't rlly complain bc "he agreed to this" even tho the contract was very much discussed only by the leads and push onto the MC all of a sudden
And overall this is way too focused on the Doms sides and not the MC, like what does he feel? which one does he like more? would he prefer to have a more loving arrangement? can he REALLY handle this set up? is he overwhelmed? WHY ARE WE GETTING ALMOST NOT INTERNAL DIALOGUE

OH AND CAIN/CANE (came back bc I forgot)
Why is he THE dom like idk it bother me so much, I understand some subs are okay with being control in every aspect so even tho I don't personally like that I was like fine wtv but at the same time is so uncomfortable to see the duality of Cane and Yun. Bc Cane constantly feels like a parent(? the way the MC behaves its like a kid w strict parents meanwhile with Yun he may act scared if he did smth wrong but he looks and acts like an adult next to an equal. D/S dynamics NEED for them both to be able to treat the other as equal even if during plays there's an imbalance, you can see it with Yun but not with Cane (which should be the more experienced one on this topic)
Also the way he keeps on bringing up the safeword not as a safety measure but as a taunt??? The safeword is not a goal to reach and he shouldn't be constantly pursuing the sub saying it, like do you not want tour partner to have a good time during the entire play? Why do you want HIM to ended bc he can't handle the stuff you're doing??