I read this on and off, maybe a I re read it all in one setting to see how the pacing really goes?
Maybe I wanted a more descriptive ending to the blond jerk, not just "this bad thing happened to him due to his choices", maybe a kind of reflection on his suffering, whether he laments it or not. I did like the reveal of the ML's identity, not too rushed nor slow. As for how they dealer with the chairman, I remember it going on for like 3 chapters? I would have cut it down to 2 if they insisted on a cliffhanger. But that old man shouldn't have gotten away with just dead after all that disgusting shit they pulled off.
Maybe the spin off will cover more about the MC's new desire to live, because if you are gonna end it in some inspirational line, you have to back it up ah. The story has been stress inducing over all the happenings, it would be nice to see where that reason to live lies, whether his new friends and colleagues, the fall of the past and present evil, and not just a lover who was pushing your buttons like a perv lol.
I read this on and off, maybe a I re read it all in one setting to see how the pacing really goes?
Maybe I wanted a more descriptive ending to the blond jerk, not just "this bad thing happened to him due to his choices", maybe a kind of reflection on his suffering, whether he laments it or not.
I did like the reveal of the ML's identity, not too rushed nor slow.
As for how they dealer with the chairman, I remember it going on for like 3 chapters? I would have cut it down to 2 if they insisted on a cliffhanger. But that old man shouldn't have gotten away with just dead after all that disgusting shit they pulled off.
Maybe the spin off will cover more about the MC's new desire to live, because if you are gonna end it in some inspirational line, you have to back it up ah. The story has been stress inducing over all the happenings, it would be nice to see where that reason to live lies, whether his new friends and colleagues, the fall of the past and present evil, and not just a lover who was pushing your buttons like a perv lol.