plot is mad confusing, there’s so many plot holes, like how the 2nd prince and mc never ...

Anonymous January 3, 2025 7:02 am

plot is mad confusing, there’s so many plot holes, like how the 2nd prince and mc never had breakfast after he spotted her on the terrace with asya??? i feel as if the author constantly forgets characters and sub plots, the mc’s maid and her brother the crown prince’s aid. they gave the aid a backstory for what?? but also im only half way through this so maybe it gets better lol

Responses
    rebecca January 19, 2025 3:31 pm

    does it?

    Red_deadhead February 5, 2025 11:21 pm
    does it? rebecca

    no it does not they give the knight a backstory u dont see them anymore after she leaves the palace a second time same with the maid until the six last chapters where she appears once and leaves the story is too rushed and lacking in logic first she wants to learn swordmanship she tells the brother we are not gonna stop until you beat me when she doesnt know how to fight also the other night dropped second they never say the important thing like bro its so frustrating

    rebecca February 7, 2025 5:44 pm
    no it does not they give the knight a backstory u dont see them anymore after she leaves the palace a second time same with the maid until the six last chapters where she appears once and leaves the story is to... Red_deadhead

    Thank you for telling me (/TДT)/

    Red_deadhead February 7, 2025 10:40 pm
    Thank you for telling me (/TДT)/ rebecca

    no prob anytime