Just jotting thoughts about the story (havent proof read my wrighting lmao)

Uska January 2, 2025 8:32 pm

It seemed to me the author got told the runtime is going to havled or somethin by their boss cus the story route flipped itself

Like think about it, at first seme was going for the protective & change for the better route, which normally in stories it takes a bit more work/chapters to establish it

But then all of a sudden he turned into a schemer, then coerced the uke into sex then made him agree to be in a relationship, which really only takes 1 or 2 chapters

Or

the author felt bored with what they got and decided to do a sharp turn in the story direction

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