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Meh read again
Exactly. The chemistry is off.
its the face, i think, but imo since the start they have tension build between them
agree agree agree. it should be doing something different, although I'm not sure what. I'm glad others are picking up on the strangeness of the vibe rn too.
as a writer it seems like the author didn't build their ralationship to them be all lovey dovey like right now. It's okay that they are finally together, but it would need more time to build the feelings that they seems to have