?? Huh?

big back January 2, 2025 5:35 am

The art was fantastic! But the storyline plot??? What the hell was the SA for? How did he know to save him? How did he not recognize the person he hung out with? Even the reason why he was mad at him was confusing.. he said he didn’t like the song but then he also didn’t answer phone or show up?? Show up for what? Was this a talent show or something?

Responses
    ShadowKun January 2, 2025 5:38 am

    I understand it honestly Lololol

    big back January 2, 2025 5:39 am
    I understand it honestly Lololol ShadowKun

    The plot was just.. it was nonexistent. The storyline alone towards the end was cute, but just left me confused as hell

    ShadowKun January 2, 2025 5:42 am
    The plot was just.. it was nonexistent. The storyline alone towards the end was cute, but just left me confused as hell big back

    Lol it really was. They resemble my ocs Lol, so I understood what they were implying. The plot was so short but I got adapted on reading short stories and can understand them

    ShadowKun January 2, 2025 5:48 am
    The plot was just.. it was nonexistent. The storyline alone towards the end was cute, but just left me confused as hell big back

    Basically ML came back > MC didn't recognize ML at first > fucked > MC left ML's home > Forgot somehow > ML came to him to give the item MC was looking for > MC recognized ML > fucked > ML brought up why MC doesn't sing anymore > Flashback > Misunderstood ML in the flashback > Rushed back to ML > MC wanting to be reunited as in "Friends" with ML. > ML misunderstood MC > Fucked > Blurting out I like you {MC didn't brought up the flashback/past since it's just a hassle [or author really doesn't want to further escalate the plot, being directive]} > Got into Relationship > The end

    big back January 2, 2025 6:11 am
    Basically ML came back > MC didn't recognize ML at first > fucked > MC left ML's home > Forgot somehow > ML came to him to give the item MC was looking for > MC recognized ML > fucked > ... ShadowKun

    LOL thank you for the clarification! Yeah it was just very rushed it seems. It’s still a cute story, I do wish it was more drawn out!

    ari (hkv+rtrn>>>>) January 10, 2025 11:52 am

    NO FR THO AHAHHA SO MANY QUESTIONS. honestly if it weren't for the rape i could look past all the random plot holes but man they just couldn't resist. i feel like this would've been so wholesome if they just didn't go down that route fr