Art is fine, characters and designs are good. Story and idea is really interesting but goddamn the actual storytelling in this is kinda messy. I feel like author is a bit amateur w the way they make storyboards between plot and smut, the flow is a bit off. Hope they improve cuz story is storying
Art is fine, characters and designs are good. Story and idea is really interesting but goddamn the actual storytelling in this is kinda messy. I feel like author is a bit amateur w the way they make storyboards between plot and smut, the flow is a bit off. Hope they improve cuz story is storying