Art is fine, characters and designs are good. Story and idea is really interesting but god...

sarcasticpotato January 2, 2025 2:22 am

Art is fine, characters and designs are good. Story and idea is really interesting but goddamn the actual storytelling in this is kinda messy. I feel like author is a bit amateur w the way they make storyboards between plot and smut, the flow is a bit off. Hope they improve cuz story is storying

Responses
    Kodama January 4, 2025 11:44 pm

    "art is fine" is crazy. that art is magnificent like tf u mean

    sarcasticpotato January 5, 2025 12:27 am
    "art is fine" is crazy. that art is magnificent like tf u mean Kodama

    Proportions i mean

    Octavia34 February 24, 2025 8:27 am
    "art is fine" is crazy. that art is magnificent like tf u mean Kodama

    Idk, the 3d assets teeth sorta threw me off a bit This story isntll the worst about using 3d assets but I still get jarred by them when they're done poorly lol