cute but a little too long

little_king_trashmouth December 31, 2024 5:53 pm

This was cute but it felt way too long considering the plot. Like the main story was 30-something chapters but if these two idiots stopped fucking and had ONE conversation this could've been cut in half. I enjoyed it but it definitely dragged in the middle and I don't think I'd read it again. BUT points for enthusiastic consent and no gross red flags. Well, the redhead was a bit predatory but he fucked off in the end and didn't really cross any major lines. By yaoi standards. The side story with him and the grimy guy was... odd.

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