yeah the plot isn't plotting much and the translation doesn't always make sense
i think this is the author's first webtoon too and she's trying to find her own style
I won’t even I cringe because how generic some scenes are. I totally agree, we aren’t too much to feel emotionally tied to these characters/story
the translation is fine it's so it's easy to understand
or maybe cus I read this on webtoon first
It’s probably due to the unofficial translations that some things don’t get across… still, can’t lie, there are some inconsistencies :(
The art is superb but the story itself is wishy-washy. I came to read this solely because I admire the artist and of people’s comments, but there’s really nothing else.
What sets this story extremely back is the pacing, and the scenes that were supposed to be impactful should have been given more chapters. I see so much potential, given the overall power system and sort of cliche tropes—thing is, this can all be doable and impressive, if someone within the writing team took a step back and reaaaaally processed the plot points slowly.
Like there were so many interesting scenes to flesh out the characters’ motivations and their dynamics, but all we get is this “So anyways, fuck this and fuck that, here’s a new sudden plot-progression and let’s move on!”
Given Maru’s (supposed) ADHD and panic disorder, I had thought that maybe that’s why his personality feels so awkward, including the characters and storyline. This is probably a nit-pick, but I’d love it if the author would purposefully-or-not stop mentioning every time Maru’s having a panic attack. Yeah, I clearly see what’s happening in front of the screen. Not to mention the “Omg, MC is such a buffoon but he’s OP!” I can see what they’re trying to do here but it comes off as too overdone and bland. I love you Maru, but if more care and attention had been given into fleshing you out more with the rest of the characters, perhaps I’d forgive these awful cliches running around. :(
Anyway, the main team’s designs are awesome and while the story’s vision looks undoubtedly great, the execution is mediocre.
Also, Eden is hot. LOL